This was for my technical writhing class I read the comic an

This was for my technical writhing class. I read the comic and answered the questions please give me input on what you like or what I could do better

What audience would this comic appeal to?

Who is the target audience? How do you know?

What features help you to identify the audience?

     How would the comic strip change if it were intended for a different audience?

If you were writing a comic strip for an intended audience of teenagers, what would be your considerations?

1. This comic would appeal to anyone who is serving, or has served in the military, especially enlisted men in the Army.

2. The target audience is soldiers and veterans. The humor in uniform of this comic strip is something they can all relate to. The uniforms and the giving and following of orders are the giveaways.

3. The Sarge giving orders and wearing a different uniform with more stripes and decorations is seen here as having superiority and power over the lower ranked soldiers. The younger soldiers are expressing their emotions regarding everyday life in the Army, and the Sarge, who has gone through all of this himself, wonders why they won\'t stop griping and enjoy the honor of serving in the Army. In his last thought, he Thinks \"I bet if ordered them to go have fun in town and fun they\'d gripe.\" I bet the soldiers would beg to differ!

4. If it were intended for a different audience, the comic strip would need to remove the uniforms. If the intended audience were a factory, you would have the laborers dressed in work clothing (jeans and T shirts), and the managers wearing suits with ties.

5. For an intended audience of teenagers, considerations would be high school and college life, social media, sports, technology, relationships, family roles, etc.

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Solution

I think instead of showing this laziness in comics you should work on something that makes others happy especially teenagers. and it should look more appealing . the presentation looks a bit boring . this is something very mundane . it should be different.