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Vicky,

Vicky Miranda <v.miranda@dino.com> Aliriza Kasra <a.kasra@dino.com> Sending Information on Beverage Sweeteners

Per your request, herewith is a short report of the investigation you assigned to Oliver Orenstein and I pertaining to sweeteners. As you probaly already know, Coca-Cola co. and PepsiCo inc. market many drinks using sweeteners that are new to the market. Totally awesome!

Coca-Cola brought out Sprite Green, a reduced calorie soft drink that contains Truvia. Which it considers a natural sweetener because it is derived from an herb. The initial launch focused on locations and events oriented to teenagers and young adults. According to inside information obtained by Ollie and I, this product was tested on the shelfs of grocerys, mass merchants, and conveience stores in 5 citys in Florida.

PepsiCo has it’s own version of the herbal sweetener, however it was developed in collaboration with Green earth sweetener co. Its called Pure Via. The first products that contained the sweetener were 3 flavors of zero-calorie SoBe Lifewater. It may also be used in a orange-juice drink with half the calorys and sugar of orange juice. Another new sweetener is Nectresse, marketed by Splenda. It comes from the monk fruit. Which has been cultivated for centurys, and only recently rediscovered as a source of natural sweetness.

BTW, approval by the Food and drug administration did not materialize automatically for these new sweeteners. FDA approval was an issue because studys conducted in the early 1990s suggested that their was possible adverse health effects from the use of stevia-based products. However the herb has been aproved for use in 12 countrys.

Both companys eventually received FDA approval and there products are all ready on the market. We cannot submit our full report until October 15.

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Vicky,

Vicky Miranda <v.miranda@dino.com> Aliriza Kasra <a.kasra@dino.com> Sending Information on Beverage Sweeteners

Per your request, herewith is a short report of the investigation you assigned to Oliver Orenstein and I pertaining to sweeteners. As you probably { Spelling error} already know, Coca-Cola Co. and PepsiCo Inc. { I should be in capitals} market many drinks using sweeteners that are new to the market. Totally awesome! { This phrase looks out of place here and is redundant. It could be removed}

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