PLEASE HELP Paraphrase most of the quote below but leave in

PLEASE HELP

. Paraphrase most of the quote below but leave in some significant short quotes (no more than 5 words each). The passage appears on pg. 2.

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\"And what the Net seems to be doing is chipping away my capacity for concentration and contemplation. My mind now expects to take in information the way the Net distributes it: in a swiftly moving stream of particles. Once I was a scuba diver in the sea of words. Now I zip along the surface like a guy on a Jet Ski.\"

Solution

And what the Net seems to be doing is chipping away my capacity for concentration and contemplation. The evil lies the usage not ignorance of Net. My mind now expects to take in information only in the the way the Net distributes it. [This reverts the complexity again]. Once I was a scuba diver in the sea of words and now I zip along the surface like a guy on a Jet Ski. This unveils the fact that technological success is not always an oasis It can also be a mirage at times.