Find and correct seven more mistakes in the paragraphs about

Find and correct seven more mistakes in the paragraphs about sibling differences. I have never really thought about sibling differences until my husband and I have lived in Chicago for just a few months. We have not made many friends yet, so we spent all our time with our child Baby Gilbert was happy to be the center of attention. He depended on us for everything. By the time our second son. Chase, was born, we have developed a community of friends and a busier social life. We frequently visited friends and left the children at home with a babysitter. As a result of our busy schedules. Chase was more independent. One day 1 had just been hanging up the phone when Chase came into the room. Chase picked up the phone and started talking into it. I thought he was pretending, but I was wrong. He in had been figuring out how to use the phone! When my husband came home, he was tired because he worked all day. When 1 told him about Chase\'s phone conversation, though, he became very excited. Gilbert has never used the phone as a child. At first, we were surprised that Chase was so different from Gilbert. Then we realized that because of our busy lifestyles, Chase had learned to be independent.

Solution

Here\' the edit with the 6 mistakes in addition to the 1st edit mistake that you have already pointed out:

1) 1st para - We have not made to \"we had not made \"

2) 1st para- my husband and I have to \"my husband and I had\"

2)2nd para , we had developed a community and......

3) 3rd para - Chase picked up the phone to \"picked up the phone\"

4) Last para - though doesn\'t make sense here. we will not use it here.

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