Revise the following to make the tone conversationalyet prof
Revise the following to make the tone conversationalyet professional.
a. Pertaining to your request, the above-referenced items (printer toner and supplies) are being sent to your Oakdale office, as per your telephone conversation of April 1.
b. Kindly inform the undersigned whether or not your represen- tative will be making a visitation in the near future.
c. It’s totally awesome that we still snagged the contract after the customer amped up his demands, but our manager pushed back.
d. BTW, dude, we’ve had some slippage in the schedule but don’t have to dump everything and start from scratch.
e. To facilitate ratification of this agreement, your negotiators urge that the membership respond in the affirmative.
f. R head honcho wz like totally raggety bkuz I wz sick n stuff n mist the team meet. Geez!
Solution
a) During April 1, As per our telephonic conversation, Printer and toner are requested by you being sent to your Oakdale office.
b)Kindly informed us with undersigned, about your representative making a visitation.
c) Though our customer raised his demands, leads to cancel the contract but manager saved the contract amazingly.
d)We are facing some problem in the schedule, even though need not to start from beginning.
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